Pitch your ideas (p4,m3 u21)

Learning outcome 3 (U21): be able to pitch ideas on a proposed media product and respond to questions. (P4, M3)

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Feedback I received =

 Could use first three letters (nld) as title as it sounds more interesting
From this piece of feedback, I understand that I could edit my title in order to make it seem more aesthetically pleasing to the reader as well as making it shorter and therefore more catchy. By making it 'NLD' this creates a catchy title and relates back to North London, 

 Graffiti like typeface looks great and links to elements behind my magazine as well as linking to back story
This piece of feedback tells me that my font is relatable to the reader and can be viewed as relevant to the genre. it also promotes the story behind my magazine and has a deeper meaning which creates personality in the magazine.

 Masthead would work, headlines may clash with masthead and body copy isn't simple enough
From this, I understand that I should consider changing my headline font as it would conflict with my masthead which could ruin the impact of the masthead. I could also consider changing my body copy as it isn't particularly easy and simple to read, therefore a simplified font would be more suitable

 Could use NLD as an icon for social media
When making my magazine, this piece of feedback shows me that I should consider creating an icon for social media using the 'NLD' brand name. this could help establish my magazine

 Target audience should have a broader age range
from this piece of feedback I understand that  I should update my age range and make it broader, this was due to the fact that my target audience age range is too specific

 Remove ethnicity from target audience due to assumptions and no evidence
from this piece of feedback I understand that I should remove ethnicity due to the fact that it has been implemented with no research to support it, so it is not needed.

 Likes bond between grime and education as it helps remove the negative connotations and could be a USP 
from this positive bit of feedback I understand that the spectator feels that my bond between grime and education in my magazine is great and could help grime be presented in a more positive light. he also felt like it could be a USP

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